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Shine

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My father's voice was always so clear, so dominant. When he was talking the whole
world seemed to be quite for a moment. The lower ranked herd members choose
every word carefully when they spoke to my father. They didn't want to anger
him because they exactly knew what could happen to them. But even if my dad was
playing the boss, which he is by the way, he had a heard of gold. I could
remember the day when my mother Luanaya died. My father Rabidos fought for her
life this night. It happened last year in winter and she never saw the sunlight
again. I couldn't fool myself, I just missed her. I sighed. I raised my head
and watched Rabidos drive the other Israia together. He was the tallest and of
course the strongest of them all. In the past some frivolous young stallions
tried to take his place but all of them failed. No other stallion would lead
the herd until he was dead and he already had a follower for this job… Reif…
who else? Reif was standing besides my fathe helping him to take the herd under
control. He wasn't relative to us, no of course he wasn't but his family had
always been close friends and aiders to us. I realized quite soon what my
father was expecting from me. Becoming Reif's mate one day. I always tried to
get feelings for him but the harder I tried it the fact that he was nothing
more than a brother for me got bigger. Reif's dark brown, nearly black coat was
shinning in the orange sunlight but my father looked just more majestic. He had
a perlino like coat. A Bright brown base with a middle brown mane and the tips
of his feathesr had the same red color as mine. I closed my eyes and when I
opened them again I looked directly in Reif's green-yellow gaze. He smiled
softly down on me. " Did I bother you with something?" His smile was so bright
and happy that I was wondering about that. " Why are you so happy Reif? We have
to leave our home today you know that right? Well… I'm not really euphoric when
I think about this darkness and everything." I shivered. Reif's smile died in
the seconds I said these words. He lowered his head a bit and snorted silent.
"I'm sorry Melay I didn't wanted to remind you on that what happened last
year….."-"It's okay", I interrupted him, " I don't want to talk about that
now…" Slowly his happyiness came back and showed up in his face. " Alright, I
see… so come on we have to go soon." Toughtful he looked at the sky, shaked his
head and walked to the herd again. I followed him...
part 1: [link]
next part: to be uploaded

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so I just felt like writing something again :D so Melay's story goes on ;P hehe I should draw them soon cause they are just too awesome :giggle: anyway... i called it Shine because there is a meaning behind this story... everything seems to be perfect but only a few notice that it isn't.
so any questions just ask ;) I'll probably continue this fiction ^^ hope you like it :heart:
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characters & story (c) =EmiOhh
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ich will wissen wies weitergeht :heart: